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Open Poetry #5

The Other

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
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0 posted 2000-01-20 12:51 PM

The Other
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I look towards the future
I see the pattern of my life
I've been steady as the earth
She's been my constant star.....

I had no thoughts of roaming
life a plan with little changes
and then I saw the other
Her star so bright, the other fallen.

James Parker Haley (C)1990

devina
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

1 posted 2000-01-20 02:57 PM

Oh really..James??? who is this girl???(Should I be jealous mr??

) Well you deserve nothing but the best hun!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
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2 posted 2000-01-20 03:09 PM

devina, thanks, but that star was long gone before your sweet star showed up in my sky.

James

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-01-20 05:17 PM

This one says alot with few words. Very good, James!

Denise

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

4 posted 2000-01-20 05:50 PM

We never really know when life will serve up an unexpected change, do we?

As with all your poems, love this one, too.

Corinne

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 2000-01-20 06:31 PM

Beautifully spoken words

Parker
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since 2000-01-06

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6 posted 2000-01-21 10:37 AM

Thanks Denise, Corinne, and Hoot, changes are never ending, but they are new beginnings.

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