Open Poetry #5 |
I Will Always Love You |
Mary Junior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 38Delaware, Ohio, USA |
I don't now where to start Or even what to say~ All I know is that I love you In a very special way You're always on my mind In my heart and in my soul~ I wish I could reach out to you To have someone to hold I don't love you for your looks What you do or what you say~ It's what you have inside you That makes me feel this way I may not ever see your face Touch your hand or kiss your lips~ But I will always love you Because it's you I can't resist |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Mary, this is absolutely beautiful! Sounds like true love to me! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Got to agree with Denise on that one At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Almost want to ask What are you waiting for But I'm not sure if that is appropriate A very nice love poem, thats for sure Thank you The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
well done, i can totally relate with this especially the last few lines~!@@@ |
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Mary Junior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 38Delaware, Ohio, USA |
Denise & Hoot, Thank You both for your comments. I think you might be right! Helmut, Thank You also. What am I waiting for?...ahh, well...ummm, it's a difficult situation. Another one of those on-line things! Vixen, Thank You as well. It's not easy is it? But I believe that if it was meant to be...it will happen. Just have to give it time! |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very nice poem. Written from the heart |
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