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Mary
Junior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 38
Delaware, Ohio, USA

0 posted 2000-01-20 12:20 PM


I don't now where to start
Or even what to say~
All I know is that I love you
In a very special way

You're always on my mind
In my heart and in my soul~
I wish I could reach out to you
To have someone to hold

I don't love you for your looks
What you do or what you say~
It's what you have inside you
That makes me feel this way

I may not ever see your face
Touch your hand or kiss your lips~
But I will always love you
Because it's you I can't resist


© Copyright 2000 Mary - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-01-20 12:36 PM


Mary, this is absolutely beautiful! Sounds like true love to me!  

Denise


  

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 2000-01-20 06:40 PM


Got to agree with Denise on that one  

 At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato

HelmutB
Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964
Canada
3 posted 2000-01-20 06:55 PM


Almost want to ask
What are you waiting for
But I'm not sure if that is appropriate
A very nice love poem, thats for sure
Thank you

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


~ViXeN~
Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93
Guelph, Ont. Canada
4 posted 2000-01-20 09:59 PM


well done, i can totally relate with this especially the last few lines~!@@@
Mary
Junior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 38
Delaware, Ohio, USA
5 posted 2000-01-21 08:18 AM


Denise & Hoot, Thank You both for your comments.  I think you might be right!  

Helmut, Thank You also.  What am I waiting for?...ahh, well...ummm, it's a difficult situation.  Another one of those on-line things!  

Vixen, Thank You as well.  It's not easy is it?  But I believe that if it was meant to be...it will happen.  Just have to give it time!


spiked
Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873
Hammond, La USA
6 posted 2000-01-21 11:54 AM


Very nice poem.
Written from the heart

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