Open Poetry #5 |
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Whispers in the Night |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia ![]() |
Whispers in the Night Strangers at first glance Looking for some romance Strangers at first light Whispers in the night. Meeting at the bars Kissing underneath the stars Saying things in flight Whispers in the night. Together we hope to stay Afraid of things to say Knowing now is right Whispers in the night. The time has come to hesitate It’s all over it’s to late To say the things we might Whispers in the night. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very good rhythm to this one ![]() |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sometimes it is over too soon... ![]() Nice poem! Denise |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...and you know what they say about those who hesitate... ![]() |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Hello KitKat...i love this poem. Very sensual. I'm still trying to learn how to navigate in here, its kind of confusing. Jerry |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Thanks JML. e-mail me and let me know what you think! You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel. Carol King |
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