Open Poetry #5 |
Wilderness Nights |
Katie Wildhorse New Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 1 |
On winter nights you can hear wolves howling at each other. On winter heights you can hear wolves crying at the moon. On winter nights the wind blows the snow slowly to the forest ground. On winter heights you can hear wild horses running through the snow. On winter nights you can hear the noise of thundering hooves flying through the crispy snow. Oh, winter nights! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Katie! Beautiful poem! Please check your email for a special welcome! Denise |
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kaleidoscope Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 38 |
I love the way you describe the wilderness in the snow. It makes me feel like I was there, the sounds, the pictures. Lovely poem. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Katie- First of all - what a beautiful name. Welcome to the halls of Passion's poets. You will be a great addition. Your poetry is LOVELY ! I love the wilderness snow scenes. Hope to see more of you here. ~Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Welcome, katie. Lovely poem. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Great picture you painted with your words. Welcome to Passions. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Katie, I love the snow in winter... but I don't know about them wolves. Welcome to Passion's. Lucky |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Bienvenidos! This struck me as Native American style poetry ... which I adore. Simple, artless, and exquisitely beautiful nature poem. --Kess Full fathom five thy father lies, Of his bones are coral made, Those are pearls that were his eyes; Nothing of him that doth fade But doth suffer a sea-change Into something rich and strange... --William Shakespeare, from The Tempest |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
You certainly appreciate winter more than I do. Excellent poem You make winter warmer |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WELCOME! Great imagery and the sounds you hear in winter! Love it! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Welcome to passions I read a lot of it in your poem Which is very good I love the wolf and the wild horses too. Thank you for this beautiful poem The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautiful images... Welcome! |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Beautiful images! I can just hear the howling, and the thundering of those hooves! I can feel the chill of the snow. It gives me goosebumps. I love this poem. Welcome to Passions! |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
You had me ou there in your winter night I enjoyed this lovely little ride. Welcome to the forum! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Katie, On behalf of all us angelic-like sailors o' the sea, welcome to Passions. Now, let me take you under my wing and give you wise counsel. Watch out for Toerag! He is a scalawag and a rascal. Never believe a word he says that impugns my purity. And watch out for Balladeer, because he is too good to be true (unlike me). Just remember, if you have any questions about the characters of these two ne'er-do-wells, you just come to ol' Long John and I'll set you straight. Great poem... I wonder, were the horses running because the wolves were after them? |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Katie, just another welcome. ... On winter nights I get so cold and lonely I need some company, so I come here. Parker |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Katie, this is beautiful, welcome to the family! Just be glad I'm not your child! *evil grin* |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Awesome Katie! You also make me appreciate winter more. I tend to loose it's majestry in the cold miserable weather! *Joy* |
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