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Winter Storms |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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Winter Storms White blankets of snow cover the ground. Icicles hang, daintily, in rows, from rooftops. Nestled under a comforter of down, Together, we lay, cradled in warmth; Enjoying the winter storm; Ravished by our love. < !signature--> At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 01-20-2000).] |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
In the middle of a cold storm you find warmth and happiness. I love the feelings this stirs up. Love certainly becomes you Ruth. Well done  Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Winter spelled in a vertical way, give rise to creative words at play. Love in your arms On winters chilly day Vision of mistic charms Ever in memory to stay In admiration of your work. DH |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Beautiful Acrostic... I couln't help but think of this though after the morning I've had here! Shower down Hover, hover Oh snow ye bain Voluminous thou art Engulf my driveway yet again Leave me tho a way out? |
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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
beautiful poem hoot....simple, yet complex, but all in all beautiful and LOL@shovel....with those arms you should have no trouble handling a shovel  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful acrostic, Ruth! Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
So very lovely Ruth....it's a warm and fuzzy feeling you gave me with this poem.... and btw I like your signature.. A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
Short and wonderfully sweet, just like our snow storms up here. I would love to be able to wrap up in warmth, such as you've displayed, during this time of winter. (lol@shovel)  May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Short and sweet  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Danny...thank you, beautiful acrostic Local Rebel...LOL, didn't say I liked the shoveling part....cute one Wildchild...it's nice to find warmth in the cold RSEvans, Satiate, Denise, fc, and Pepper...thank you all At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet. ~Plato |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Well, this is nicely done I can see you are the one Not just to say...how nice Thought I add a nice surprise Eventually you will see Ruth and her poem…how inspiring she can be Friend of mine Ruth you are a divine In all the time I've know you, I have to say Eagerly I read your poetic display Nothing ever will stop me Deeply to adore thee A nice poem that you wrote. I hope you can see what I tried to do here, especially for you. Just the first letters did'nt came out bold. I guess you still ahead of me. And why shouldn't you be Hugs and Love Helmut The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Liked much Ruth..You sure bring warmth even to winter storms doncha.. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Snowstorms - Nature's Oracle of Winter |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Helmut, so creative, thank you my friend Moonmoon...thanks Nan...nice acrostic...seems this has generated a few...enjoy that |
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JD Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 61N Prov |
Well Done Everything Dies |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Ruth, beautiful poem, and thank you for describing winter to me, cause we dont seem to have winters here LoL, tend to skip right over it =) ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
In time you'll see the Spring break free, Heralding new growths of green. Again the winter will give way, To the time when lovers sway Ever in grasps of desire To love anew as days transpire. Hear the birds sing forth the days, In trilling songs as breezes sway Supple tree and flowering bloom, Decrying Winter's now gone gloom. Arise and sing for life anew, Revel! These days are made for you. No more the Winter will send its blast, Withering your soul unto its last. Irreverent winds will be dispursed, No more will you feel their curse. Tomorrow brings warmth and light, Entreating us with warm delight. Resolve to live fully your life! ! [This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (edited 01-21-2000).] |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Ruth, I'm sure glad to see you're cozy, calm, and collected in this wonderful winter ditty, but if you could spare a few minutes of your time, I need some serious reassuring on this "meeting" thing! Have you and your man actually met, and if yes, please tell me how it went, cause we have one week left, and all I can do is think "jitters".....you know, the bad stuff....HELP! Reassure me please! ** I'm reaching for the brightest star I've ever seen - knock my ladder out from under me, and you'll wish you hadn't !! -pFF ** Here's to 2000! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Jd and Echo...thanks LJA...Applauding!!! Wonderful acrostic...thank you PFF...check your e-mail dear |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Wonderful Ruth! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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