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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-01-19 08:53 PM


The "Why" I Write

Laying hidden, softly, out of view and sound
rumbling intently, growing gently from heart's mound
convenes a word, coupling with another, just until
it pours forth, gigantically, as if in a swell.

This action forces one to take a pen in hand
and write, poetically, something fine and grand
but the mind hangs back as the heart pours forth
wondering if the words will take their rightful course.

For the mind knows what the heart yet does not
that the words now penned will soon be forgot ~
a vacancy will then lie in the open hearts' well,
but give it a moment, let it sit just a spell

and again it will pour forth with words enamoured
of love and life and countless here-afters,
moments of time thrust into a black hole, become void
as gilded letters to paper refuse to be destroyed.

To impart that shift of air so the perfume stings,
to extol the bell so the chimes doth ring,
to hesitate, slightly, so the words come slow
to touch the heart of the reader, there, just so.

To allow another to see a love's true course,
to capture the exhilaration of a wild and free horse,
to allow the sense of quietude in a babe's soft sleep,
to share with one the shadows of loves' fill, deep.

Anguish comes to one, many, sometimes comes to all
when they hear inside the words, know they have the call
and yet, when written, it only sounds trite, so banal
ah yes, anguish comes to many, sometimes comes to all.

But,

laying hidden, softly, out of view and sound
rumbling intently, growing gently from heart's mound
convenes a word, coupling with another, just until
it again pours forth, gigantically, as if in a swell.

And the poems thunder on.

7 September, 1999
©KRJ



 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



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Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-19 09:23 PM


Wooooohoooooo......Sunshine this is wonderful! Oh, so true!!

Denise

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2 posted 2000-01-19 09:40 PM


This is one of my favorites of yours, Sunshine  
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 2000-01-19 10:03 PM


I second Denise  
Sunshine
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4 posted 2000-01-20 09:02 AM


denise, Hoot, thank you for your comments.

'Deer, thank you for re-reading...I'm glad you didn't mind the re-post.

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



Pepper
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5 posted 2000-01-20 11:08 AM


You always manage to touch me with your words Sunshine.....This is Wonderful, my dear...
Echo Rhayne
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6 posted 2000-01-20 03:36 PM


Excellent!!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~



Sunshine
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7 posted 2000-01-20 03:44 PM


Well, now we know, Pepper is "touched" [LOL] and Echo is Excellent!  Thank you both!

 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



HelmutB
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8 posted 2000-01-21 08:39 AM


And you're doing it so well
I mean the writing, besides other things you do
Love it
Hugs and....

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


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