Open Poetry #5 |
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The Way We Go |
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Eurzulie729 New Member
since 2000-01-19
Posts 1 |
The Way We Go I love the way you look at me, I glow when you take me away To an undiscovered, wonderful place Where the rainbows have a gold-lining, For their rarity shames the sky And the clouds swimming in it. We can fly through the barren lands, Where the trees are shaken and cold. But as we pass them and look back, They're full of cherry blossoms, And dripping with sweet tears of abandonment. We shrug and turn away To the rose colored sunset That contains our dreams which Will never be reached. So now we go to the midnite sky Where the darkness envelopes our dreams, And turns them into bittersweet nightmares Of everything we fear in this world, The death of anything, good or bad, That will never return to grow old, For we are the tragic lilacs, unwilling To be truly seen in the harsh sun, so we lurk, And we lurk, Lurk until we find true love with depth Together. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Eurzulie! Beautiful poem, such lovely images! Please check your email for a special welcome! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions ![]() |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions. Tis a truely wonderful place to read and post poems. This one has some wonderful imagery. Well done. ![]() |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wonderful! What a rich piece of work - I love the 'tragic lilacs'... Welcome to Passions. ![]() |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful poem ,Loved the imagery, Welcome to passions ![]() |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
IMAGERY I LOVE IMAGERY If Roland wasn't my middle name it might be imagery. WELCOME TO THE FORUM! nice to have you with us Wonderful start! |
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One Who Understands Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 251Cedar Rapids, Iowa |
I sense that you will touch many hearts with us here at Passions... Wonderful poem ![]() |
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