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Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
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0 posted 2000-01-19 02:30 PM




BioChemo



watching you
vomit
I think of
an emu
it is the point
of
your upper
lip
each moment
when the emu
emerges
we take
our places
you with
the pan
I at the sink
and to you
in one movement
with warm
cloth

Dear LadyClaire



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Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
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Redlands,CA,USA
1 posted 2000-01-19 02:44 PM


Had a friend a couple of years ago go through that sfuff. My best to you and yours for a successful treatment.  Emu? Interesting image there.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 2000-01-19 02:50 PM


Nasty stuff chemo...this really give a good depliction of not only how it effects the person recieving it, but also their family.
Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27
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3 posted 2000-01-19 07:32 PM


Andrew, HootOwl, thank you both.

Claire

Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
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4 posted 2000-01-19 07:43 PM


Simply wonderful imagery - raw, very visual.

I like!


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