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Imagination's Destination
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Imagination's Destination |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Imagination's Destination Floating above the atmosphere of time freely envisioning kaleidoscopes of natures abundance. Soaring beyond reality to footpaths of imagination dancing with stars twinkling upon riverbeds creating sparkling waterfalls. Frolicking down the grassy meadow side exhibiting freedom of a delighted child on a sun filled afternoon. Creating pleasant images as a means to delight paying highest honor to the continuous source of imagination's destination. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautifully poem, Gloria. I really love the third stanza...what a feeling that is. And of course, there is but one, the creator, who deserves highest honor...very well done. Michael |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very nice poem Gloria...it's amazing the places ones imagination can take them. I often thing of POWs and the people in concentraion camps who survived only by imagining themselves someplace different. Nice job!! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I am nothing without my imagination! I think it's a shame when children are discouraged from using theirs..and a bigger shame when adults have none....good poem!  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, and the places we can go...there's no limit! And no price! Everybody can go! Just one of God's many wonderful gifts! And thank you, Gloria, for this wonderful gift! I enjoyed the trip! Denise |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Yo LD: Enjoyed the read... I think it's one of my best features... my imagination. Keeps me young don't cha know. My best to you and yours. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
picture of poetic perfection, lost dreamer, you aren't lost at all! Corinne |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I loved the last verse. What a delightful poem. I enjoyed it Liz |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
This piece is striking in its natural elemental references...a fine poetic escape to the carefree meadows of youth. Thank you!  Claire |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Excellent, dreamer. The imagination is everything. Reality is for people who can't face fantasy. Good work  |
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Kid Pedestal Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 26Chandler, Arizona |
It's already been said, but the description that you give to the imagination is remarkable. Kid Pedestal |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
LD, This is excellent!! Can't do without my imagination. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I thank all of you for reading, and I'm glad you all enjoyed. I appreciate all your kind replies. |
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