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Calling out your name....
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Calling out your name.... |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
hurting myself...enjoying the pain though im on empty space calling out your name and your not around..again please dont think im blaming you i built this ship.. can you believe i thought we could sail away.. with the tears of sunshine as our beacon to light our way we can be pretty and perfect stunning and apathetic like you admire sitting by the open fire ready to fall to pieces unknown never willing to leave my heart ..alone |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Jackal, this brought me through it with interest, the last line especially striking. Claire |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
there is just something about your poetry that draws me......always. "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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