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I Wanted You To Know
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I Wanted You To Know |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas 
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You really seemed surprised, girl To hear me on the phone. Did it really make you happy- To think that I was gone? What about that love undying- That you vowed so long ago? My feeling have changed a bit- I just wanted you to know. I wanted you to know, dear- How lonely I have been. And how I’ve driven by your house Time and time again. In hopes I’d catch a glimpse of you- Just walking in the yard... And as the days crawl slowly by- It’s really hit me hard. I wanted you know about The things that I have done- In spite of all the girls I meet You’ll always be the one.... Who’s captured this wild heart of mine And will not let it go- I love you and I always will- I wanted you to know. Visit My Home Page http://www.geocities.com/montcogunslinger/HomePage.html |
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Terri Madrid New Member
since 2000-01-15
Posts 8 |
OMG!!!!! i turely felt the poem. lots of emotion here. she would have been licky if only she would have listened to your emotions. Terri |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Speachless here...excellent piece of poetry GS  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Tender and touching.....and well done, of course! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
Now ya'll...why can't i find a guy like this? "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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