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John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 860
Texas

0 posted 2000-01-18 11:28 PM


You really seemed surprised, girl
To hear me on the phone.
Did it really make you happy-
To think that I was gone?

What about that love undying-
That you vowed so long ago?
My feeling have changed a bit-
I just wanted you to know.

I wanted you to know, dear-
How lonely I have been.
And how I’ve driven by your house
Time and time again.

In hopes I’d catch a glimpse of you-
Just walking in the yard...
And as the days crawl slowly by-
It’s really hit me hard.

I wanted you know about
The things that I have done-
In spite of all the girls I meet
You’ll always be the one....

Who’s captured this wild heart of mine
And will not let it go-
I love you and I always will-
I wanted you to know.



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Terri Madrid
New Member
since 2000-01-15
Posts 8

1 posted 2000-01-18 11:34 PM


OMG!!!!!   i turely felt the poem. lots of emotion here. she would have been licky if only she would have listened to your emotions.
  Terri

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 2000-01-18 11:41 PM


Speachless here...excellent piece of poetry GS  
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-01-18 11:55 PM


Tender and touching.....and well done, of course!  

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


Saxoness
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since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102
Texas
4 posted 2000-01-19 03:28 AM


Now ya'll...why can't i find a guy like this?

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


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