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1999 what is was : 2000 what I want it to be
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1999 what is was : 2000 what I want it to be |
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Gurion New Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 8Cleveland Ohio |
I don't know if this constitutes as a poem or a list but a freind told me to post it and see what people thought so here it is. In case you were curious she is the one I have never met. It's been at least two months since I last sat and thought God my brain is just so full I need to get it out So many things just floatin' in my brain well your going to get it so here it comes Well we had Y2K and what was the hype for We went through all that **** for nothin not even a little glitch then there was the stocks just soarin' correct me if I'm wrong but once you hit the top doesn't it always fall back down I saw friends come and go and found out some of my friends weren't really friends at all and found out some of my friends are worth more then gold I had some classes that were tough and some that were cake I got some new music that I liked and some that sucked but that is the way it always is I found out that my mom still thinks I'm twelve I found out my dad still loves toys as much as I do My grandparents are getting old real old My little brother is growing up to be a good kid My older brother hasn't grown in years I'm still allergic to cats and It sucks they're so cute I'm still in love with someone I've never met I still watch stupid **** on tv late at night I still can't sleep My life hasn't changed much in the last year I'm still me which is more then I can say for some The things I'd like to do this year: I'd love to meet the one I love and hold her tight I'd like to raise my GPA over 2.0 so I can get off probation I'd like to make some new friends I'd like to find out what it is I'm here to do I'd love to find out who I am I'd like to get to know my dad better I'd love to make him proud of me I'd like to make something of myself I want to be less shy with people I want to get laid I want to be happy I want to be me but better like with a shinny new coat of paint and a tune up ya that's what I want Hope to see you next year [This message has been edited by Gurion (edited 01-18-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Well, I think this qualifies as a poem! I enjoyed this and I admire most of your aspirations..... Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
me too....love how you end it "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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