There's Not a Thing That's Wtrong With Me, (That Loving You Won't Cure)

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Open Poetry #5

There's Not a Thing That's Wtrong With Me, (That Loving You Won't Cure)

John Yaws
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 860
Texas

0 posted 2000-01-18 04:24 PM

There’s not a thing that’s wrong with me
That you loving you won’t cure.
You’re everything I wanted.
And that I know for sure.

The love reflected in your eyes-
Is so clean and pure...
There’s not a thing that’s wrong with me
That loving you won’t cure.

You said the day we met, dear-
You loved me at first sight.
And made a vow within your heart-
You’d someday be my wife.

There’s been a lot of heartache-
We’ve both had to endure,
But there’s not a thing that’s wrong with me
That loving you won’t cure.

Our love kept us together-
When I was young and wild...
And bonds of love grew stronger
Each time you bore my child.

Old age is pressing on us-
In this I rest secure....
There’s not a thing that’s wrong with me
That loving you won’t cure.

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 2000-01-18 05:19 PM

Smiling at this one...love certainly does cure a lot of woes doesn't it?

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-01-18 05:20 PM

So beautiful and sweet!

Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

3 posted 2000-01-18 05:32 PM

Gunslinger, another piece to send around to some of Nashville's cats.

Liked it!

Claire

Terri Madrid
New Member

since 2000-01-15

Posts 8

4 posted 2000-01-18 11:30 PM

gunslinger: ive been married for 25 years, im 43 years old and have been looking for the perfect words to tell my husband how much i love him, i think you answered for me thank you. Terri

Saxoness

Senior Member

since 1999-07-18

Posts 1102
Texas

5 posted 2000-01-19 03:47 AM

someday i hope to find a love like this.

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

6 posted 2000-01-19 07:33 AM

As usual 'slinger...I think ya got a Buntline special here.....big thoughts....big heart....

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

7 posted 2000-01-19 12:47 PM

There's not a thing wrong with me, that reading your poetry won't cure.
DH

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