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Until We Meet Again |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
You came to me at a time when life was incomplete, I loved you so, you had to go, another time to meet. Our time together was so short, I never had a chance, to give you love, to hold you close, to even cast a glance. You must have known I needed time to reach inside my soul, to listen for directions and to achieve my goals. You saved me from destroying the spirit inside of me, in doing so you gave me hope that we were meant to be. I never have forgotten how close I felt to you, and praying to the heavens you'd forgive me too. I needed faith at the time to carry me through pain, the memory of wanting you forever will remain. I think of you so often, yet time has made me see, that at the time you came, we were not meant to be. Yet it seems like only yesterday I was planning for our time, I still think of all the things we'd do together on our climb. I feel that I will see you, before this journey ends, and your mother I will be as well as new bestfriends. Thanking you is not enough for what you saved me from, you knew that I would crumble, then who would I become. The years have passed and I have nourished my spirit once again, I have grown and learned so much, I no longer will pretend. I cannot wait to touch your face and hold you in my arms, just like I've done a thousand times in my dreams so charmed. One day we will run and play my baby girl, my friend, and I'll keep seeing you in my dreams, until we meet again... |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Truly, deeply and exquisitely lovely. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Poignant and haunting, this lovely poem stopped me in my tracks. Thank you for sharing. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Beautifully written, I could feel the emotion in it as I read it! Very touching! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Oh this is so very, very beautiful...magnificently done. Such emotion...I can feel the longing, yet sense the peace you've come to find in knowing that you will be together again. A wonderful poem, Tamera. It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful so beautiful , the emotion it made me feel |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Tamera, thank you so much for this. I too lost a little girl, and have this faith that we will be together again. Thank you. B Gravitt |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Very hard to experience. You're writing is exquisite though. Peace |
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Tamera Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 121 |
Thank you for the comments and "support". Although this happened sometime ago, I am truly at peace with it now...I do have a certain longing, but I think that remains forever. of course, until we meet again..  Tamera |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so touching and beautiful, Tamera. I'm sorry for your loss. Denise |
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Richard Junior Member
since 1999-12-27
Posts 35California |
Absolutly beautiful and touching Tamera |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Tamera, this is so beautiful. Thank you for sharing. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is very beautiful....I hope you get to see her again!!! I can sooo relate to most of this!! Nicely done!! Take Care Bridgette |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Beautiful written !!!!!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautifully written |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Well-written Devina! Nathan |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
You have wrapped a warm blanket of love around every person who reads this poem, and each will surely shed a tear You have written your sorrow beautifully Liz |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Tamera, you've taken this reader on a journey of the heart...one that ends in faith, light and promise. Thank you for the gifting this cold afternoon. Claire |
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