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Silently Caressing
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Silently Caressing |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Laying silently here I softly caress The outline of my breast Thinking of you And of how I'm blessed To have your love To share my love with you If only we weren't apart If I could only Look Into your eyes Day after day And feel your soft sighs Against me as we sway To feel your sweetlips Wholly against mine Ever so passionately That's how it would be I see it my love I feel it my love Hear in my heart And it's always been Here from the start Laying silently here Softly caressing the Outline of my breast Wishing it were your Breast. Dark Angel. What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
There is such beauty in these longing words Dark Angel. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Dark Angel. Very pretty! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
DA: This is so softly gentle..  HUSG Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
DA...this is beautiful. It speaks volumes of longing in its words. Nicely done my friend. I understand. Hugs |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Dark Angel, you conveyed feelings so well in this peom. Well done!! DH |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Martie, thank you! ------------ Denise, thanks so very much! ------------ RG, Thank you *hugs*------------ Ruth, hon thanks for understanding it means so much. *big hugs* ------------ Danny, thank you for your lovely comment! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I always enjoy your heartfelt words. Simple longing at its best  Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkAngel- Very softly longing. Very nicely said. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Gettin a bit sappy here aren't we? LOL just kidding! Very well written DA!! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very moving...sweet poem, I liked it a lot.  |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Very lovingly sweet poem. Wonderfully heartwarming. Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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catslair Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 48 |
the simple sweet innocence of gentle touch and longing...semm to go hand in hand here.....loevly verse..... |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Lovely. |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Oh how wonderful....I know this so well Drive it like you stole it...LOL And another thing...When I rev my engine I want people to think the world is coming to a end....hehehe |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Just beautiful A of L - I adore it. Such longing through a tender, delicate voice. Well done indeed. K |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
The title was enticing, the poem is beautiful. Liz |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
JennyLee, thank you so very much my friend ----------------- Thank you for your lovely comment Marge ----------------- LOL Angel, thank you so much, glad you liked it hehe ----------------- PdV, glad you liked it, thank you. ----------------- Thank you WildChild. ----------------- Again thank you very much Catslair! ----------------- Thanks Moonshine! ----------------- First_Knight, thank you so very much! ----------------- Sweet Butterfly Thank you for your lovely reply. ----------------- Elizabeth, thank you so very much! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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