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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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If all the oceans dried to dust, and mountains crumbled to the ground. I couldn’t feel much worse, I trust. for in such great distress I’m bound. I cannot say exactly where, this plaguing emptiness began. Or when my heart began to tear to leave me but a broken man. Be careful of things going well, for every light soon fades to black. And every man with hallowed shell, cannot escape the coming crack. |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Me like. Truly a lovely poem. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
OH KEVIN how old are you? you look to young to lack Hope. Look inside yourself life does not have to be the way you describe it here. Look towards your creator and your innerman the Holy Spirit guide to this journey we all take together but more so seperately. You have a real talent with words let that be the start of your path! and when you are on YOUR path you will find PEACE and JOY always. Harmless Roaming Preacher |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
kevin, i like it when u write happy poems =-) this ones good, but it makes me sad to know that u are sad. =-( |
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Rus Bowden Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 139 |
Hi Kevin, A broken crumbling world. Easily made me feel of the lowest points in my life. Makes me appreciate the good times even more. Thanks. Rus |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Kevin...you are wise beyond your years my young friend  |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Just remember things get better, now smile for me!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is sad , So much wisdom in your words , you look so young , give hope a chance and take everyday like its a new begining happiness is just around the corner |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
I felt the deepest of despair myself, nearly three decades ago, at the age of nineteen, and never that desperately ever again, in spite of everything. I trust that your sadness will creep out of its hole, and metamorphosize as mine did, and fly into the wild free sky with joy! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
cannot escape the coming crack..... I just loved that line. You have a very intesting style, please post more. Parker |
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