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Summer Walks |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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" Summer walks " Sun has gone down over sea Ocean calm ,darkness deep Moon it shines on water Reflections dreams sought after Stars that shine a light for me Every one new to be seen Wind whispering over seas Blowing breezes softly free Smell of salt in the air Lingers close for us to share Waves rolling slowly on to sand As there we walk hand in hand |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
Wow Whiskey, If I didn't know better I might think this was written with me in mind! I can smell it, I can see it, I can almost taste it, And I can use that right now, We had Approx. 5" of snow the other day and it's 10 degrees below you know and could almost feel those balmy breezes blow(sorry Bsquirrel J.T. ref.) THANKS!!!!!!!!! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful Whiskey! You created a picture in my head with your poem. Thanks! Nathan |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
AWAKEN ALL THE SENSES THIS MORNING! Being close to Myrtle Beach, and having SNOW AND ICE today...I needed to be reminded of what's around the corner! BBbbbrrrr! Wonderfully written, Whiskey, with perfect simplicity and description.  Sherry"Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thanks Paul for your reply , Brrr its cold there , its damn hot here its been over 36C all week Ive had enough of it Thanks Nate for your kind reply Thanks Sherry for your reply too it was nice thanks [This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-18-2000).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Very nice picture you painted with words.  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Whiskey! Such a lovely stroll! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I love to walk along the water, hand in hand |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Wonderful Whiskey!! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A very romantic scene that awakens the senses. A truly lovely poem Liz |
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