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whiskey
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0 posted 2000-01-18 09:57 AM


" Summer walks "

Sun has gone down over sea
Ocean calm  ,darkness deep
Moon it shines on water
Reflections dreams sought after

Stars that shine a light for me
Every one new to be seen
Wind whispering over seas
Blowing breezes softly free

Smell of salt in the air
Lingers close for us to share
Waves rolling slowly on to sand
As there we walk hand in hand



© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Paul Hoekman
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1 posted 2000-01-18 10:19 AM


Wow Whiskey,
If I didn't know better
I might think this was written
with me in mind!
I can smell it,
I can see it,
I can almost taste it,
And I can use that right now,
We had Approx. 5" of snow the other day
and it's 10 degrees below you know
and could almost feel those balmy breezes
blow(sorry Bsquirrel J.T. ref.)
THANKS!!!!!!!!!

Nate Dogg
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2 posted 2000-01-18 10:20 AM


Beautiful Whiskey! You created a picture in my head with your poem. Thanks!

 Nathan

simplyYRREHS
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3 posted 2000-01-18 10:29 AM


AWAKEN ALL THE SENSES THIS MORNING!  Being close to Myrtle Beach, and having SNOW AND ICE today...I needed to be reminded of what's around the corner!  BBbbbrrrr!  Wonderfully written, Whiskey, with perfect simplicity and description.

Sherry

 "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau



whiskey
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4 posted 2000-01-18 10:29 AM


Thanks Paul for your reply , Brrr its cold there , its damn hot here its been over 36C all week Ive had enough of it    

Thanks Nate for your kind reply  

Thanks Sherry for your reply too it was nice thanks  




[This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-18-2000).]

Local Rebel
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5 posted 2000-01-18 11:02 AM


Very nice picture you painted with words.  
Denise
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6 posted 2000-01-19 12:02 PM


This is beautiful, Whiskey!   Such a lovely stroll!
hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 2000-01-19 12:14 PM


I love to walk along the water, hand in hand  
Echo Rhayne
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8 posted 2000-01-20 01:34 AM


Wonderful Whiskey!!

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~



Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 2000-01-20 02:08 AM


A very romantic scene that awakens the senses. A truly lovely poem
Liz

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