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agony Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 18 |
Why should love bring so much fear,to every souls heart?People are afraid of people and that should nevr be.We are killing each other off and no one seems to care.But should there be a truce or a truth or dare? Tracy Schlieper |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very nice verse  |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Very nice. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Very nice and I do care....I once heard someone say..."It is my philosophy that peace is something nobody wants but everybody strives for" or was it the other way around *shrugs* I dunno Happy New Year ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I also care....I do wish more people did though!! Nice little poem!! Take Care Bridgette |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Just a suggestion here, but perhaps by changing your format a bit, you'll make your piece a bit more reader friendly. Why should love bring so much fear, to every souls heart? People are afraid of people and that should never be. We are killing each other off and no one seems to care. But, should there be a truce or a truth or dare? |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
I must agree with Ruth, it does read a little easier that way!! But it was still a great poem! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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