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**Fairytale Love**
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**Fairytale Love** |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Two hearts blend at first sight, Love alone makes the world right. Every detail slides into place, Ounces of doubt become erased. Two fit together- hand in glove, Souls float in creamy clouds above. Kisses alone mean contracts, Bonded by more than contact. Desire with the utmost care, Dazy eyes within a stare. Blushing and the weakened knees, Feeling that it's meant to be. Such innocense within each touch, Purity, belonging, means so much. Two hearts join beneath stars above, *Wishing and longing for Fairytale Love* Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is beautiful , I really liked this  Love can be so grand |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Devina! I could feel all the emotion that went into this! Well done! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Thanks whiskey! Denise- I'm glad you felt all the WISHING!...G* Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
"every detail slide into place". I can relate to that...beautiful poem, devina. What a feeling to be caught in such a love. Michael |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I've been here...wishing it would never end!! If only you could stay forever in a moment!! I've always dreamed of such a love!! Thank You!! Take Care Bridgette |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
If love needs a hand Give her your's You seem to have a certain special touch Very nice, Thank you The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Fairy Tale love is very real......Don't stop the search. You have done it real justice in these words of yours Devina Drive it like you stole it...LOL And another thing...When I rev my engine I want people to think the world is coming to a end....hehehe |
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catslair Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 48 |
ahhhhhh this is lovely reminds me of the days I had hope.........how to revisit that place.......I'm not sure...... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Never give up the hope for that kind of love |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Enjoyed very much. |
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tulip Member
since 1999-07-04
Posts 320unknown |
Is it just a fairy tale...or is it really possible? I hope it's real!!! |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
Dearest sis, wow check me out i am actually replying to your posts. just kidding. I know exactley who your talking about in this poem, of course cuz i am your sisssy but anyways, (amber smiles not gloating, because she told you so!) But in all reality I know that there has been a lot of pressure on you to let him go over the past months, but listen to your heart okay? love you. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Ok so now who's being romantically versatile??? hmmmmm????  nice work ...!! |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
Wow! Where is it that I can find this? Took me back years to when the butterflies were in my tummy, first crush, first kiss...how wonderfully you told of that rush. I can only hope it is possible to find such candor in the future. Sherry"Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I want to thank you all for your sweet replies!! Amber- now sis, how could you NOT know who this one was for??  It's always hard to go back and try the love again, we'll see, but no rushing either! love you!LR- ok, so you've came in here and found me out huh??G* Every one has a romantic heart me thinks, it's just when you choose to use it that counts!!he he Thanks again everyone, I'm flattered...MAYBE even close to blushing...nah!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
i love faery tales. this is one to keep. ever, thelma |
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