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Ama Zhu Zhu Junior Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 25Taipei, Taiwan |
. absent I hear you chanting my names "I'm 'a love you with the back of my hand baby love you with the back of my hand gonna..." fade to grief azzhu |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
I find myself liking this even though it is totally foreign to what I usually write and read. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wow, very powerful! You definitely understand the power of few words. It's almost like a haiku, the way it gets under your skin. Write more! Please? Mike |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Absolutely unique - this one has me hunched over in a ball of shuddering, and sorrow. This one tells a poignant story; a lifetime in such few words. It's the first one I've seen of yours. I'll be watching for more... |
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kaleidoscope Junior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 38 |
It's in the scarcity of your words that the power is found. Such remorse, no relief - it says it all in the words "... fade to grief". |
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WolfsMate Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 121New York |
So much said in so few words!! Excellent! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I am very impressed with your style, you have a way of making a very deep inpact with just a few words. Nicely done  |
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