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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom 
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Hair of spinning gold < !signature-->arms just as wide 5 years of age angelic smile of child Knows nothing other than truth and the feeling of a mother's love taught well by my sister put in practise by many a hug but little arms opened wide to greet an Aunty called Me the gifts between to be opened as she sat contented on my knee How she snuggled inside my arms as off to bed the two of us did go this darling little angel that made life inside me flow Tiffany the jeweller living on Bond street charges us the earth to design and fashion gifts in gold that hold no measure to your worth Not even, a silver duck..  In case anyone wonders what this is about. I last saw my niece Tif, when she was 5, in fact it's the only time I saw her and we fell in love, you know, that kind of love between child and adult, or two children in this case *g* and now she's a mum of two and I love her dearly and bought her a silver duck and she still has it and treasures it and until tonight I didn't know she was reading what I wrote...so, Tif...here's to you and your Nursing career...you're special Tif and so is the love between us... HUSG Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 01-17-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Well now that I've gotten the tears out of my eyes....Cindy, this is so precious! What a wonderful, sentimental, loving poem! I'm sure she's crying now too! HUGSDenise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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cjs9853 Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 44smyrna, tn usa. |
thank you,i will treasure this aunt sue yes i still have my silver duck you gave me so long ago.i am going to give it to my little girl when she is five.i think you have such a beautiful way with words.my love for you is so very special. husg. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Ok..somebody pass the Kleenex! Oh, there...ok...wonderful, wonderful poem.. a sweet Aunty and a very special niece... I truly enjoyed this...gosh! Have to go have a good cry now!  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Rainbow, Any child would easily get attached to you. This poem is so adorable, a wonderful keepsake for her to always remember that special love Liz |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Rainbow what a wonderful poem and a great story!! Take Care Bridgette |
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cjs9853 Junior Member
since 1999-11-26
Posts 44smyrna, tn usa. |
wow!!!!!! that is so sweet we both love it.you are very very special to tiffany.god bless.husg |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
How sweet She is one lucky girl to have you as an aunt...I can feel the love in this one [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 01-17-2000).] |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Wanna be my aunt too?? This is beautiful!! I too need a kleenex ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
This is simply sweetness.......in the making Drive it like you stole it...LOL And another thing...When I rev my engine I want people to think the world is coming to a end....hehehe |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is so beautiful RG!!! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
Ron can't we have a "Crying Poetry" forum ? ... so the softies like me would know what to expect ...  Rainbow you outdid yourself ... *you* are special sweetheart ... Plaisir d'amour ne dure qu'un moment, Chagrin d'amour dure toute la vie. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
Now isn't this just too sweet?!!! HuggsZ RG!! and to RG's neice -- a hug too! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is lovely, Rainbow... as are you!!! And you don't know how much I appreciate Carol and Tif for returning your love with love!!! |
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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
yes this is very beautiful, really like it a lot, the little ones can do that to your heart |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Denise: Thank you...she's such a poppet.. HUGS Tif: You're welcome sweetheart.. HUSG PDV: Kleenex on route..*g* HUSG Elizabeth: I'm not sure about that but they are so loveable.. HUGS Justbleu: It's great what technology can do.. HUGS CJS: That's one great daughter you have.. HUSG Hoot: Bless you.. HUSG Echo: There's always room for more, so yep.. HUGS FN: Thank you.. HUGS DA: Thans sweetheart HUSG JTF: You're biased..*g* HUSG LR: Thanks, I'll pass the hugs on.. HUSG Suthern: Just as I do with you.. HUSG FC: Yep, they sure can, can't they?.. HUSG Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rainbow- Awwwwwww ! What a wonderful slice of love you've served up here. It reminds me of a special little niece of mine named Rachel who was also five when I met her for the first time. We have that same spectacular bond that 'just is'. Very special loving words from a lady easy to love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Kleenex?????? Somebody give me a towel A compliment would not get close So well and nice you written this Thank you The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Rainbow, Such a nice niece piece. Peace!! |
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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
Hehehe...I was awed to read this masterpiece of yours.....Tiffany seems like a very sweet person...you certainly are, Tiffany (if you are reading this). God bless. |
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