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the moment after that you desperately wish was before
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the moment after that you desperately wish was before |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
I did it, yes no one but me, I put the noose around my neck voluntarily I might add, shook my head no at the request for a blindfold and yes I did this deed with my eyes wide open, and seemingly in my right mind, with my underlying raging need for self destruction as the only possible suspect to blame and now... I wait for the platform to drop and my life to end. remember this...nobody has an unbreakable heart |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
WoW, this is deep and powerful! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
really like your signature echo.....thanks |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Intense....yikes!!! I like this!! Take Care Bridgette |
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myslinky Junior Member
since 1999-11-25
Posts 27 |
i realy enjoyed this poem! I wonder if its true though. what would be a persons thoughts after doing such a thing. Words like violence Break the silence M.L. Gore |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I enjoyed this. The way you wrote it, it sorta hands down like the long end of a rope -- which is fitting. And the title pretty much sums up a whole mess of situations like that; luckily, not all of them are fatal.  Keep writing! Mike |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
You won't do that Lovey ... I'll cut the rope before ... cause that's what friends are for ... HUSG  |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Honey, ya got the wrong idea for that rope! It's supposed to be around your wrists and ankles, tied to MY bedposts so I can.....oh wait a minute....wrong forum....sorry Nan.....put the damn eraser away....I didn't finish my fantasy...Really a great piece Lovey....(No Nan....not that piece, the poem the poem!) |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
WOW! What a great thing to read this morning...and to hope that that's exactly how my ex-hubby will feel one day. Very soothing to my soul to imagine the day! HAHAHA! Sherry |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
That which does not kill us makes us stronger... I don't think the rope can hold you.. really! you should write more kid!!! How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm torn between disappointment that this wasn't a new one (*G*... hint, hint) and delight that one posted while I was vacationing has been brought back up so that I can echo here what I told you in email several weeks ago... *S* But all my ponderings of how often we put the noose around our own necks and cause our own destruction vanished upon reading Toerag's suggestion for the rope. LOL. Now I'll admit his idea is MUCH better... but I'll also remind you that I have my baseball bat handy! LOL. |
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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
yep, been there done that... [This message has been edited by fc (edited 01-18-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Don't self-destruct, Lovey. You are too important to too many people. No noose is good news!!! |
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