Open Poetry #5 |
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Love is a Star |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Love is a Star How many times have I looked up at night, Gazing at a tiny star? How many wishes had been made, By such a broken heart? Love is that way, I think, Something to wish on and hope to get All along seeing that it is your choice. In the darkness of night, sorrow, and plight, Love shines through To dance and sing and make you rise. Love is a twinkling that shines inside Your soulmate's utterly bewitching eyes When you hear them say: I love you. Finding yourself lost in such a deep void Look about you at the glistening diamond stars For you see, there are that many chances To find love. So gather up your courage, Take a deep breath and wish, For that shooting love isn't the only one to streak across your sight. And just, as it is so simply said, Reach for the stars. < !signature--> "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." [This message has been edited by Astraea (edited 01-17-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So beautiful and hopeful! I love the message in this! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Anne Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 78 |
Nicely put! It reminds me of that Emily Dickenson poem about hope being the little bird that perches on the soul... |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
wow this was breathtakingly beautiful, it really makes u think of that special someone |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This was a really good feeling poem. Enjoyed it very much. |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is wonderful so much feeling in it, I enjoyed reading it much ![]() |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
I loved it! It was beautiful! Wow! makes you think of that certain special someone in your life. |
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