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Justbleu
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0 posted 2000-01-16 07:52 PM


Did no one see
My love within me
Beginning to grow
A mother's bond
Does it not show
On the outside
She and I
Close as could be
My tiny angel
A major part of me
The joy of being
All through me
Did no one notice
A glow to me
That in which says,
Ah, it's a mommy to be


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 Creation of woman from the rib of Man: She was not made from his head to top him; nor out of his feet to be trampled upon by him; but out of his side to be equal with him, under his arm to be protected, and near his heart to be loved."




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Denise
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1 posted 2000-01-16 08:15 PM


This is precious! I remember those days so well! Congratulations!  

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


Rus Bowden
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2 posted 2000-01-16 08:32 PM


Hi Justbleu,

I love poetry written from within a family.   And this is a joy and a tribute.

Rus

Justbleu
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3 posted 2000-01-16 08:36 PM


Thank You both sooo much!!  This is how I felt until one horrible day it all came to an abrupt halt a few years ago!!  I loved that feeling and hope to have it again in my life!!

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Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-01-16 09:37 PM


JustBleu-

With love like that glowing ...
I would have noticed.
I hope this wonderful occurence
comes again to you.
Bless you.
Love ~*Marge*~

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Justbleu
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5 posted 2000-01-17 01:16 AM


Someday I hope, I did so love her!!  Thank You Marge!!
Eloise
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6 posted 2000-01-17 01:23 AM


This is so sweet.  I wish you well.  
Anne
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7 posted 2000-01-17 01:27 AM


You put it so well!
A portait of love.

devina
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Cali
8 posted 2000-01-17 04:41 AM


With a heart as loving as yours, you're sure to be blessed with another angel yet!! Very touching poem!!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 2000-01-17 04:46 AM


What a sweet poem and what a lucky little baby
Liz

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
10 posted 2000-01-17 12:49 PM


Thank You all sooo much....she was sooooo much to me.....writing this seemed to help me, it is something that is and has been difficult to deal with the past few years...I feel a little bit better letting people know now how much she was and will always be to me....I need to forgive myself for what I did!!
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