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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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No one seems to know Or truly understand All the conflict That lies within me Like there are many Of me inside Things seem one way They also seem another Which are they to be?? So uncertain in any Of what I say or do I have been told It all depends On what I want Nothing is right or wrong Unless I perceive it to be This is confusing I do not understand I want what is right Discard the wrong But what does it all mean So many things in life At first seem so easy Will there ever be a time?? That I again can know forsure |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Confusing times...we tend to think on a decision way to long. Usually the first thing you think is the right one. Hope it gets better for you soon! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree with Rebecca on this, Bridgette. Sometimes we can think ourselves into confusion. Great poem! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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catslair Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 48 |
sounds like an apt description of discursive mind........the confusion, the cloudiness......and the turmoil.... well done.....  |
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Anne Member
since 1999-12-31
Posts 78 |
I think anyone can relate! Very well expressed! |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Good! Nicely done. ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
It's really nice to see you posting, Bridgette... Nice poem too... I hope all is well... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Whtdove you have reminded me that I do dwell on a decision too long, I really needn't worry sooo much and not be so indescisive!! Thank You and it feels good to talk to you all again......Denise yes I am very good at "thinking myself into confusion" what a good way to put it, Thank You again.....Catslair, Anne, and Astraea, it is great to see people I haven't seen before here at PIP it makes me feel good that more people are finding this place, it is really a great place, Thank You......Nan I am hanging in there and am very happy I posted yesterday...Thank You as always!! |
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