Open Poetry #5 |
What is my true Identity?? |
Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Looking around What did I see?? This reminder of me For all to see I may never know If this is true This identity Honeybear So beautiful A ring Could I ever be Such a person To anyone But, to how You believed me To truly be **Who am I?? I am not sure anymore!!** |
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WolfsMate Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 121New York |
Do we ever really find out who we are? Just look to those around you and you will see in their eyes who you are. Enjoyed the read. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Bridgette, you are you, and that's the best you can be, and a great thing to be! *hugs* glad to see you around and posting again! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Hey Wolfsmate, Welcome to Passions and Thank You for the thoughts!! Echo I am glad I posted yesterday it helped me sooo much, but then this place always does, Thank You!! |
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catslair Junior Member
since 2000-01-16
Posts 48 |
as they say...beauty is in the eyes of the beholder......and maybe we are just reflections of how others see us.....for it as result ot their response to us that i think we develop some of out indentity......what do you think? |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I do agree with you Catslair...mostly this poem I'm looking at the inner me. But, I do agree that "beauty is in the eyes of the beholder." Thank You!! Bridgette |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
Identity...something i think we search for our entire lives, as it is continuously changing. Amazing to hear how others would define you, as it is sure to differ from your own perception. I call it "self-excavation"...and it's a great process of discovering who you are. Good luck on the journey. Sherry "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
An inriguing poem you wrote very ellegant What we are we will find within ourselfs we just have to start looking I know it's sound so easy and it seems not to be that way But it is a start very nice poem, i like it The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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fc Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 130 |
yep, understand this well, it is nice to see yourself pleasently through the eyes of others, but when you lose yourself....who helps you see? good poem |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Who helps me see....maybe the man upstairs!! Thank You!! Bridgette |
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Sonny Junior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 29Schenectady, NY, USA |
We can take on so many personalities - it is up to us who we want people to see. The intrinsic journey is the most difficult and you have commenced this trek splendidly. Sonny |
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