Open Poetry #5 |
Save Me |
whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
" Save me " Here I sit Where I was Who I've seen So many places I've never been Hurt I feel inside Eyes scared open wide Somewhere else I need to be I am gone, not me I look at a broken soul A girl crying aloud For help not found She lost the way No one stays Alone today So drug in hand Here I am Ready to end my life Then into my mind A thought of you arise And I drop to the floor To die would mean you no more My heart it cant let me win See you have it there in you within |
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WolfsMate Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 121New York |
Poignant tale you have told. Enjoyed the read. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
As the brew mellows, this too will give you flavor and punch whiskey... nice work.. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Great poem, you've really captured the power of love in this one. Nathan |
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highwayman Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42Cookeville, Tennessee, usa |
Your soul is not lost for it i have found it's here with me on unknown ground. I'll keep it safe till the day comes that your here with me damn this sounds dumb. girl i miss you and wish you were her. thimking of you always. |
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