Open Poetry #5 |
Magic Spell... |
For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
I found a secret. Hidden well within.. A warm emotion Sweet as nectar That fills me as no other could out of my soul it flows In my cup it runneth over I want it so badly I Feel that need, that need to share it Washing me clean I knew this feeling It is in a pups eye.. with the first glance of it's mother It is retained in a sisters soft smile and it is there.. when two lock their eyes Swimming on each others tides It is there too.. And so... I offer it to you.. From within I give you it all... Here my love.. here arre these simple, softly spoken magick words.. I love you.. Edward A.Beerman.. [This message has been edited by For_Never (edited 01-18-2000).] |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Indeed Magickal..I enjoyed this very much...beautiful words Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
For_Never- I like this. I just like it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is sweet and touching! I like it too! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
this is a heart melter for sure "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Magical indeed!!! love it! What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Sonny Junior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 29Schenectady, NY, USA |
Nice piece of writing. I've always been fond of using the eyes as the medium through which all emotions can be revealed. Sonny |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful words Edward Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely. ~Isis~ (Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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