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For_Never
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since 1999-10-27
Posts 125
Cincinnati, oh, United States of America

0 posted 2000-01-18 08:01 PM


I found a secret.
Hidden well within..
A warm emotion
Sweet as nectar
That fills me as no other could
out of my soul it flows
In my cup it runneth over
I want it so badly
I Feel that need,
that need to share it
Washing me clean
I knew this feeling
It is in a pups eye..
with the first glance of it's mother
It is retained in a sisters soft smile

and it is there..
when two lock their eyes
Swimming on each others tides
It is there too..
And so... I offer it to you..
From within
I give you it all...
Here my love..
here arre these simple, softly spoken magick words..
I love you..

Edward A.Beerman..



[This message has been edited by For_Never (edited 01-18-2000).]

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JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
1 posted 2000-01-18 09:08 PM


Indeed Magickal..I enjoyed this very much...beautiful words  




 Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born.

L. Pirandello
16th Century Dramatist


Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-01-18 09:14 PM


For_Never-

I like this.
I just like it.
~*Marge*~

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Denise
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Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-01-18 10:55 PM


This is sweet and touching! I like it too!

 Denise

And slight is the sting of his trouble
Whose winnings are less than his worth;
For he who is honest is noble,
Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~


Saxoness
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4 posted 2000-01-19 04:09 AM


this is a heart melter for sure

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

5 posted 2000-01-19 04:29 AM


Magical indeed!!! love it!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Sonny
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since 1999-12-18
Posts 29
Schenectady, NY, USA
6 posted 2000-01-19 11:16 AM


Nice piece of writing.  I've always been fond of using the eyes as the medium through which all emotions can be revealed.  

Sonny

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
7 posted 2000-01-19 05:45 PM


Beautiful words Edward  

 Let your heart guide you. It whispers, so listen closely.
~Isis~
(Sovereign of the Spirit)


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