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Mommy take the pain away......
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Mommy take the pain away...... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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Mommy Hold me now You did not hold me then You encouraged I did not want it But you did You did not help Do I tell you The Problems My Fear Guilt Shame Terror The emptiness Most of all the hurt No one was with me I was alone Without you mommy I was scared Later when I cried You said I was weird So alone I wept And went to sleep I loved her as you say you love me I grieve I cannot forget Impossible to try [This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 01-18-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JustBleu- You won't ever forget her ... and that's what makes you such a sweet person. I feel your pain ... HUG ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
To forget would be to erase the memories...Keep heart dear! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thank You Both so much for your thoughts!! No I'll never forget My Little Starshine!! Bridgette |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh how very sad  |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Bridgette, I'm glad you're getting this all out! *hugs* ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
No one could ever hold the right ot ask you to forget a part of youself. Keep her in your heart always! |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
I am glad that you are getting this out. I know the pain but not to the degree you must of felt. Keep it up. "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all." |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Don't worry I won't forget her...she was and will always be a part of me!! I do agree with you all that I got this out....I feel a bit better after the fact!! Thank You!! Bridgette |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Tugs on the heartstrings! Best regards! DH |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Justbleu: HUGS sweetheart Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
I can only agree with all of the above Well done Tahnk you The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Thanks guys...it's helping soo much to let such feelings out!! Bridgette |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is so sad and full of heartfelt emotion. |
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Sonny Junior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 29Schenectady, NY, USA |
Bridgette - Writing has great therapeutic benefits and it seems you are well aware of this. Your courage to write a piece like this is admirable - thank you for sharing such an important part of your life with us. Just remember - one does not have to forget to forgive. Fondly Yours, Sonny |
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