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Justbleu
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0 posted 2000-01-16 08:29 PM




Mommy Hold me now
You did not hold me then
You encouraged
I did not want it
But you did
You did not help
Do I tell you
The Problems
My Fear
Guilt
Shame
Terror
The emptiness
Most of all the hurt
No one was with me
I was alone
Without you mommy
I was scared
Later when I cried
You said I was weird
So alone I wept
And went to sleep
I loved her as you say you love me
I grieve
I cannot forget
Impossible to try



[This message has been edited by Justbleu (edited 01-18-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-01-16 09:41 PM


JustBleu-

You won't ever forget her ...
and that's what makes you such a
sweet person.

I feel your pain ...
HUG !
~*Marge*~

 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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devina
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2 posted 2000-01-16 10:11 PM


To forget would be to erase the memories...Keep heart dear!

 Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Justbleu
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3 posted 2000-01-17 01:14 AM


Thank You Both so much for your thoughts!!  No I'll never forget My Little Starshine!!

Bridgette

hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 2000-01-17 11:41 PM


Oh how very sad  
Echo Rhayne
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5 posted 2000-01-18 03:46 AM


Bridgette, I'm glad you're getting this all out!  *hugs*


 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~



amber
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6 posted 2000-01-18 03:48 AM


No one could ever hold the right ot ask you to forget a part of youself. Keep her in your heart always!
White Wolf
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Somewhere in the vast wasteland
7 posted 2000-01-18 04:04 AM


I am glad that you are getting this out.  I know the pain but not to the degree you must of felt.  Keep it up.

 "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all."

Justbleu
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8 posted 2000-01-18 12:19 PM


Don't worry I won't forget her...she was and will always be a part of me!!  I do agree with you all that I got this out....I feel a bit better after the fact!!  Thank You!!

Bridgette

Danny Holloway
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9 posted 2000-01-18 02:40 PM


Tugs on the heartstrings!
Best regards!
DH

 

RainbowGirl
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10 posted 2000-01-18 03:21 PM


Justbleu: HUGS sweetheart

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.


HelmutB
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11 posted 2000-01-18 08:28 PM


I can only agree with all of the above
Well done
Tahnk you

 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.


Justbleu
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12 posted 2000-01-19 12:00 PM


Thanks guys...it's helping soo much to let such feelings out!!

Bridgette

Martie
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13 posted 2000-01-19 01:23 PM


This is so sad and full of heartfelt emotion.  
Sonny
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14 posted 2000-01-19 02:43 PM


Bridgette -

     Writing has great therapeutic benefits and it seems you are well aware of this.  Your courage to write a piece like this is admirable - thank you for sharing such an important part of your life with us.  Just remember - one does not have to forget to forgive.

Fondly Yours,
Sonny

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