Open Poetry #5 |
Love is |
whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
"Love Is" Love is The sky So clear and Bright So blue Such a delight Love is The stars Shinning high Sparkling up Oh so bright Love is The moon So bold and white Gleaming light Down tonight Love is The trees Swaying gentle in the breaze And in winter time Loosing their leaves Love is The flowers With petals so bright Opening morn Closing at night Love is The rain Falling down The sound of the drops Hitting the ground Love is The sun Showing the day Giving us light The fading away Love is The birds Flying so high Putting on a show For you and I Love is In what we see Love can be different From you and to me Love is Everything That dear to you hold Whatever it is Never let go [This message has been edited by whiskey (edited 01-16-2000).] |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
May Love be always for you as you described it. Very good the way you feel, well done The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Well-done> I agreee with you too. Love is everything! Nathan |
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gary marshall New Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 4Nottingham.UK |
Love is special, so often we forget. Thanks for the reminder. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Whiskey - You go girl ! Well said. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Whiskey, Well done, good job, I really enjoyed the read. Sy |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Thank You for all your great replies |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful thoughts on love, Whiskey! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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