you were there ,but you werent

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Open Poetry #5

you were there ,but you werent

stephen j
Junior Member

since 2000-01-15

Posts 21

0 posted 2000-01-15 05:39 AM

YOU WERE THERE BUT YOU WERENT

I HAD YOU IN MY ARMS,
BUT I COULDNT FEEL YOU

I COULD SEE YOU,
BUT YOU WERE INVISIBLE

I'D LOST SIGHT OF YOU,
I COULD NO LONGER SEE YOU
I COULD NO LONGER FEEL YOU.

YOU WERE THERE,BUT OU WERENT

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

1 posted 2000-01-15 09:20 AM

This is small but got the point across well , Your emotion came through , Well done

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

2 posted 2000-01-16 03:03 PM

Short and to the point!

~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~

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