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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida 
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Love - it seems to me a dream When twilight rests upon my brow And fingers break the fragile skein That separate the here from now Atop a bed of silk so fair ‘Neath diamond starlight winks a’bright Oh! Glorious eyes bold – I ensnared Render wakefulness a futile plight Luminous shines my pure white skin Halo’d within a moonlit glow Ethereal dreams don adoring grin Cradle my body with lover’s show Sweet be mine upon this night Where Chronos’ rule traps us not Within your arms, the dawn we’ll fight Nay, Lonliness! We deny our lot Enrapture my senses dream lover mine If only for our short short while Let me taste pure love divine Upon the lips of your tender smile Alas - as dawn’s light creeps slowly in I am left with naught but a gentle tear In remembrance of I – your arms within Your strength abolishing my every fear Love – it seems to me a dream And I but a lonely twilight gleam May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You've described yourself very well, enjoyed the read!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
This is almost musical to me...you sing a sadly beautiful song here...I adored it....every line is lyrical Words bloom like flowers that seem astonished at being born. L. Pirandello 16th Century Dramatist |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Very, very nice, Satiate.... I wish we could see more of your work posted.  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like this so much! I think you should submit it to the main site! It would be an instant hit....very lyrical! Good job!  |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Oh Satiated one - this poem was wonderful! I love the description of love in dreams. This poem flowed so well, and says so much of what every person must feel at some point in their life. I also love your picture. Surely, it must be one of your favorites. What a sweet sweet scene. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Wonderful piece you painted the picture well , it flowed very nicely |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Sonate de Amour (if I only could write french) Well written and flowing Thanks for such a very nice poem |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
M'friend, this reminds me much of my life. If only I could make my days match my dreams...Well done, and I LOVE your verbiage here! |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
devina & JennyLee ~ Thank you very much Nan ~ geeze, thanks! I wish I could post more! My muse yanno...she's a flighty one. PdV ~ Thank you! I took your suggestion and submitted - my very first one! LngJhn ~ What a sweet one you are! Thank youHelmut ~ Thank you for reading! Chris ~ Don't we all..  Thanks to you m'friend.May I never be too busy to help another's load, Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed. --Author Unknown |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
A most excellent read... may your dreams come true. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A beautiful dream and lovely poem. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
A very beautiful dream....sometimes reality can be a dream.....unfortunately one can wake up out of it too!! I liked this poem!! Take Care Bridgette |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Satiate, this is ever so beautiful, it flows beautifully! Truly a wonderful dream. looking forward to reading more of your works.What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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