Open Poetry #5 |
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To my love...... |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, ![]() |
My beloved- I lay weak beneath our innocence, I challenge everything about you, I play the games that cast away, All the things you thought you knew. My beloved- I ask not for your apologies, Of the past that haunts us both, I want not of your eagerness, That we choose not to show. My beloved- I have never taken more from you, Than everything you have given, I have always let you break me down, Despite the life we live in. My beloved- I will always light your eyes, With that childish gleam you posses, I will never forsake our love, For you have risen above the rest. My beloved- Although time has often weakened, The truth that’s in your voice, I need you now because I want to, Not because I have no choice. My beloved- Times have changed us both, Since the simple easy good-byes, We’ve shared times unimaginable, That I savor sweetly in my mind. My beloved- Laughter melts away, The ice in any heart, Reconstructs the broken lives, That we forced to fall apart. To my beloved here today- I pray to god that forever you’ll stay. Here in this silence that we have made- My heart, and soul, are yours today. |
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merely_a_jester Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 67Arkansas... that's all you get |
i would just like to say thank you for writing this it conveys deep feeling it was not just enjoyed merely_a_jester |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Beautiful sis, I don't know what he's done to you(getting you all gushy n stuff) ![]() ![]() Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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HelmutB Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 964Canada |
Such sweet love you line'd up there Such sweet love you don't find just anywhere Very nice,enjoyed this poem. The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools. |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Such a beautiful Love you speak of , so much emotion is poured out of your words, I liked it alot ![]() |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Beautiful!! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Amber! Hope you've shared it with him! ![]() Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A very good display of emotions here, Amber. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Such emotion Amber!! Quite Deep and very well written!! ![]() Bridgette ![]() |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
Thanks to you all for your comments, i am glad that you enjoyed, and sister of course i was gonna be the independent one that never needed anyone. I guess i proved myself wrong. |
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