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It Always Takes Two.... Too
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It Always Takes Two.... Too |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA 
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It always takes two for a rendezvous That will sustain a lifetime through. It always takes two for a tête a tête To last forever once you've met. It always takes two, an addend to sum To live as one all days to come. It always takes two for a complement ~ A perfect balance never spent It always takes two for a tandem ride Life's obstacles met side by side It always takes two to say, "Yes, I Do Forever want to be with You"  This was a great challenge - Anyone else out there have theirs?????  [This message has been edited by Nan (edited 12-31-1999).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Nan! And this would be great to hang on the wall of every married couples home! Denise |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
it takes two to tango no i dunno dance moves yuh but love sigh o yuh love it nan well versed as usual in diction and in rhyme and in meter and in etc... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Yep, great challenge alright and you did a fabulous job with it! Great to read this one again, that's for sure! A timely message.... and I agree, should be hung on every married person's wall... think I'll print it out and hang it on mine. Y'think that might help? |
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maedavid Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 24Carrollton, TX, USA |
It takes two or God would have left it at one. The best part is if you can find your missing rib and then you can really be complete. Here is to you and your special fellow out there on this New Year's Night. I hope you will be together one way or another. Thanks again for the little angel you sent to me. She was so--- precious. The only way to know Love, is to Know God. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Gosh I remember this! Beautiful. And I was frantic to write mine..did it at work if I remember..so I pulled mine out of my zipdrive and posted it....thanks Nan. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
As long as it doesn't have to be in iambic pentameter, I'm in. This is a lovely poem, Nan Liz |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
It was a great challenge - very interesting to look back on perceptions of not so long ago. My oh my, how things change... Michael |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Nan: Smiling here..  HUSG Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, One and one really makes one. *L* Sy And Happy new year. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah, lovely...I think I'll try my hand at this one |
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Wolfgang Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 124Hamilton, Ont. Canada |
Too True Nancy! A Happy New Year to you. BTW I just read your Christmas poem and I loved it. ( I did not have my ICQ turned on, forgot about it til I thought it was kinda strange not to hear from my friends.) That will teach me! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Fantastic, Nan - and I agree! K...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
It takes two baby, it takes two baby, just me and you , it takes two. two is company. two two two mints in one. Really enjoyed this Nan just feeling two goofy twonight! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
What a great Valentine poem this would make! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This would definitely be a good Valentine poem! Beautiful work, Nan! *Krista Knutson* ~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack, Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare, Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water, Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha |
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