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meg071898 New Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 4 |
No one can know what the pain is like Seemingly alive on the outside Dying on the inside The laughter, false smiles, and lies They all conceal the inside So afraid So very afraid of letting anyone see the pain I have to be strong They won't understand They can't understand I won't let them see the tears I am alive on the outside But dying on the inside |
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neitham Junior Member
since 1999-12-29
Posts 42India |
Welcome to the family! I could relate to this one..U have put my thoughts into your poem...very well written.. |
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Paul Hoekman Member
since 1999-12-28
Posts 382Harwinton Ct. U>S>A> |
What could this pain possibly be from? If you want people to understand , you have come to the right place. The more you write the better you feel. but now you've touched the heart of the resident roaming harmless preacherin me. PLEASE PRAY: Dear God I don't know what the source of the pain is for meg but please come into her life and free her from it,show her the peace the joy and the hope and love which is you and in everyone of us through the Holy Spirit through your son Jesus Christ,Amen. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is sad, I feel you pain , As Paul said you've come to the right place for understanding  Welcome to passions |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Welcome yet again to another newcomer, I'm glad you've chosen to share your pain rather than keep it inside!!! Just remember that in all honesty...everybody needs somebody when things get rough, don't be scared to open up!Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Welcome to Passions, Meg! Wonderful, well expressed poem! I, too, have found that the best way to deal with pain is through writing! Again, Welcome to Passions and check your email for a special surprise! Denise And slight is the sting of his trouble Whose winnings are less than his worth; For he who is honest is noble, Whatever his fortunes or birth.~~~Alice Cary, ~Nobility~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Very sad but well done! Welcome to Passions! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is a nicely written poem Meg and just as surely as there are those that will hurt you there are also those that care and will Love you. James |
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simplyYRREHS Member
since 2000-01-03
Posts 162 |
Salutations and Welcome! Enjoyed the thought that went into this writing. You'll find Passions to be full of love, laughter and healing. Enjoy! "Heaven is under our feet as well as over our heads." ~Henry David Thoreau |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions |
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