Open Poetry #5 |
you slipped away |
stephen j Junior Member
since 2000-01-15
Posts 21 |
YOU SLIPPED AWAY. BY STEPHEN J i had you in my arms, but you slipped away. i had you in my reach, but you took a step back. you were on the top of a hill, but the path was to steep. you were at the bottom of the ocean, but i couldnt swim that deep. i had you in my arms, but you slipped away. [This message has been edited by stephen j (edited 01-15-2000).] |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
I enjoyed your poem very much, i remember how it feels to have somthing so sure, and you dont realize how much you want it until its gone. That feeling of regret can eat someone up. Welcome to passions and i will enjoy reading your future posts. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is great , wonderful peom , These feelings are not nice at all , I wish you all the best |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I liked this poem Stephen. This happens to me quite a bit. I'm going to keep trying til I find one that sticks. James [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 01-23-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I really enjoyed this..a lot said in few words |
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