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eulalie New Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 8 |
Some days I wake to find a restless world anxious, moving around in circles, domesticated. Other days I wake up to beautiful women controlling my mind- women absent, gone, searching for nothing. Yet others, I wake too early and leave my apartment hoping to find things left long ago, never existed, or existed never out of my head. On these days, I forget who I am, but it all comes back with stacks of bills, unpaid, no way to pay, and endless taunts of past and future lovers screaming across unknown regions in my mind. On days like today I smoke joints like cigarettes and watch the sun fade the paint on the wall until I am alone. |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
well I was going to give you some critique on this but I think its excellent so you just put me out of a job....  |
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