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Critical Analysis #2
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tecoyah
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since 2003-11-16
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0 posted 2003-11-16 05:44 PM


air guitar

slithering past damp hair
a gentle whisper in my ear
gust of fury punctuating flows
mother nature with terrets syndrome
wildly unpredictable is the wind
the essence of tempest
the kiss of blown flakes
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Tim
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since 1999-06-08
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1 posted 2003-11-16 05:59 PM

Tourette's ?
tecoyah
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since 2003-11-16
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NY
2 posted 2003-11-16 07:15 PM

oops
wintertao
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL
3 posted 2003-11-17 07:22 PM

well I really like this I think its very creative
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