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Thorntree |
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mystic1 Junior Member
since 2003-07-25
Posts 14Definitely not Kansas |
Thorntree Night casts her smoky veil of darkness and watches as the moon strokes across the stars The shadows of obscurity rise from the mist to weave their way through forests afar Grow now the Thorntree fruits spoilt and bitter Born of neglect and despair and strewn upon the forest floor they litter Grow now the Thorntree spiked with claws of Sammael, the Angel of Death gnashing teeth of Amalek; all spawns of Hell The fires of darkness rage deep in this cursed wood and kindle the madness of the behemoth in whose way none dare stood Prophesies of the damned foretell of the sorrows plowed deep into the earth as the tears of despair fill the furrows Ravage the Thorntree! Rape it and slash it and tear it asunder! for to leave it prosper would be mans’ greatest blunder Care not the Thorntree ‘tis morn after all when comes the morrow shall it stand tall? Night casts her smoky veil of darkness and watches as the moon strokes across the stars The shadows of obscurity rise from the mist to weave their way through forests afar Still watching, still dreaming |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Mystic A Poe-like, haunting poem. Love the arrangement...especially how the first stanza is repeated as the last. This does not work in a lot of poems, but certainly does here. This poem also has good syntax and meter, excellent work....:-) >>>ice<<< |
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