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Critical Analysis #2

The Love We Had

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2003-10-03 01:04 PM

I lost a love
That lived my life
To it’s full and end

A love I found
I would never find
If I hadn’t had this friend

A love so true
She said I found in you
I dare not remember it began

But where is end
I had a friend
To talk to over again

The words I confide in you
On your shoulder
Where my tears would spill

But friends again
Until the end
I hope you will love me still

when you live you begin to die
when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die

merlynh
Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 411
deer park, wa

1 posted 2003-10-11 05:47 PM

This hits deep!  My wife died last month perhaps that is why.

This last statment?  I wonder if it was something that came after you wrote this?

"when you die memories of you life lives in others
when memories of you begin to fade
you truly begin to die"

I find memories to be all too painful and get back to feeling a large hole inside myself.  Truely I can not bear to live with memories with the one I loved.  I want it back so much because life felt complete.  I guess you have to let some memories die so you can go on.

Thank for sharing.

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