Critical Analysis #2 |
inspired by a bad night, and indefinitely untitled |
hush Senior Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 1653Ohio, USA |
The night, as a whole, is steeped in dissatisfaction. A neighborhood sleeps while she (lonely) broods; a childish act, resolute nonetheless. (discipline only confuses her) She sets the mood with music she knows she’d do well to avoid and slumps in the frumpy clothes of a noncommittal life. A cold precipitation drones on the asphalt; another, less predictable cycle wreaks havoc on the woman. the ---- gets wide and relatively sloppy as a byproduct of the female condition. They rarely ask permission. *********** Okay, I'm not sure if I'm going to get away with my dashes above substituted for a no-no word? I was going to just use to parentheses to indicate a blank, but after I typed it out, I felt it might be a little too... visually suggestive? lol Anyway, the reference (and the discipline quote above that) are from a Diane diPrima poem called 'The Practice of Magical Evocation' if anyone cares to look it up. Thanks ahead of time for reading. |
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merlynh Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 411deer park, wa |
It all appears to be--a--pp. Part of the human condition, if male, "have to be strong." My late wife always thought I din't un.do.stand. Ido. You just have to watch-um coming from the sky. Birds and things. Were very small in the scream of things. Edited by me, mistakes were done as a part of a higher scense then Senior Members. |
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