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grassy ninja Junior Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 41Kentucky |
It's as early as a song, the copyrighted hour. Whatever it was, there was a hint of Notice. This hour does not go unobserved, Does not get cropped off every April, Or encored in October. It makes us weak with wants With embraces cheek to cheek, and orphaned mouths missing Words and kisses. Our jigsaw hands sauntering Like icebergs over what it is Appropriate to touch without telling. Horrible to wait, your scientific touch Foaming over my cuts. A clean stinging, an hour that asks no questions. "Trust thyself: every heart vibrates to that iron string" -Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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rose Member
since 2003-08-02
Posts 53 |
hmm....i must say i liked this poem quite a bit...you had so many great images, but you scrambled them a little to make it much more interesting and complex. i especially loved the first stanza, and was impressed with the whole poem in general. good work. ~rose |
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