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Critical Analysis #2
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miekeone
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since 2003-08-03
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0 posted 2003-08-03 06:12 AM


Magamactiacally backlit my findings, intertwining
Jaguar fur spots patterned outlining

Mystery portals blotted inside iris rings
Painted with my dreams, eyelids butterfly wings
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rose
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since 2003-08-02
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1 posted 2003-08-03 09:15 AM

wow!! this is awesome!!  my favorite poems are the ones that leave me completely baffled and confused, and i have to read them several more times even to begin to comprehend...this is one of those poems. it is short but complex in its simplicity.  it is superb--i look forward to reading more of your work.
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