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raevynsbreath
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since 2003-06-06
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Mi, USA

0 posted 2003-07-30 04:22 PM


sweep me up
in tender loving arms
tell me there's more than lust in your eyes
and take me home with you

snuggle me tight
have your way
shove itself within me
tell me that i'm almost free

hold me for days
promise you won't let go
stay with me always
or i'll get scared

remember anniversaries
and tell me that you love me
more than yourself
i'm being selfish now

deal with my moodswings
avoid my pms
deal with the bloody underwear and the laudry
i'm on my period ya know

laugh at my jokes
i know they're not funny
smile at the children
though you'd rather them not be

place the ring on my finger
and live through two wedded hells
then when ours comes along
slip away and cry

i'm not there to hold you
i'm not there to make you feel better
i'm not there to make you bleed
i'm not there

run away
run away
run away
i'm coming for you
run away
run away
run away

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