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green_itchy_stuff
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0 posted 2003-07-23 02:52 PM



When is it ok to lie?
And who decides on this?
Is it ok to introduce
A system of rank into a family?
Pon and bishop; better or worse.
The order of importance.

I know its jagged, but there's reason
A trickle of music, and vision inside
A tangled web with a knot and break
Hallucinations damaged degree, it crawls
In a trap it stops, mutual surplus
One voice and point at a moment

Idea and instant then demand control.
Perfect, collaspe, hold, wrap, choke.



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