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babygurl55 Junior Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 18 |
I found this infection I don’t know what to do It is tearing us apart I’m slipping away from you I think of you day and night And all I do is cry Why couldn’t you even have the heart To so good-bye I know you found someone else But if you only knew How much I really Cared about you You ask what this infection is And I tell you it is love All you can say is I’m sorry I have this infection too Unfortunately this love is not for you |
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Magia_negra Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 77CA, USA |
Another broken heart here... Love is pain, but life doesn't make sense without it  ...somos los locos para siempre |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
Very nice poem. I really feel for you. getting your heart broken is horrible. but sadly its a fact of life. no wonder my mom tried to keep me from dating as long as she could. LoL Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
People you care about can be jerks so just be careful next time. Im not an expert critiquer so I thought Id just give you some advise instead |
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