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Critical Analysis #2
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raevynsbreath
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since 2003-06-06
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Mi, USA

0 posted 2003-07-23 11:26 PM



love is sideways
and underneath
to those of us who know it so
a thinker with need
a hater with thrill
a killer with rage
the inbetween, roundabout orphan
with gum stuck to the shoe
the lost fair maiden
with nothing more on her mind
than innocent fornication
as the bell tolls

to the lover
the fighter
the peacemaker
and the writer
to the man who knows not what he does to others
love is something more than nothing that ever existed
on the edges of someone else's cliff

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