Critical Analysis #2 |
boys do cry |
xkiss_me_hardx Junior Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 13 |
i don't know how good this one is, it was sort of spur the moment. Tell me what you think (this one doesn't have a title... yet) . I'm just so sick of people seeing boys as emotionless machines, thats what we are expected to be, especially at my age... Cupped hands, catching a saline soaking, and concealing emotion. they forsake you? things you only fancied, thoughts only entertained for glee, manifesting from your doing... feeling her hand creeping up your throat, or maybe it's just your dinner? choking on guilt. Do you feel it, No goodbye kiss? So close to the edge, catch me, even if I don't deserve it. As new as it may seem, boys do cry... |
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wild irish Junior Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 31 |
not often enough, well said www.rateapoet.com |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yes, they do, and so do many grown men. The ones that can't or don't? I tend to stay away from them. |
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