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ladywrytr Junior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 10Southeastern MA |
Empty Echoes I come around a corner and see your smile My heart stops, but I keep moving Knowing it is not meant for me I watch you laugh and wonder how My screams can be so loud inside And yet, you do not hear them I wonder if you ever heard me Or was I just a valley Throwing back the sound of your own voice |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
Hello Kimberly, Welcome to PIP and to the CA forum. I'm sure you will find plenty of interesting stuff here. Enjoy youself and join in the discussions. Meanwhile, please take a minute to check our guidelines, if you have not done so already. And check your email for a special message. Pete |
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Ladybug Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 236Massachusetts |
 Hi Mom, glad to see you finally posted! Great poem, love the last line. And Pete (aka Not a Poet) is a great help, and also a math wiz -- which ranks him pretty high in my book!  Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end... |
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