I wrote this poem for a young female Doctor named Lea from the Phillipines. It is supposed to be the words of an angel who has spoken to her heart to ease her sorrow of her fathers death. I have never really written poetry and I'm sure my grammer, spelling and punctuation ar terrible. I would still however appreciate any advice, feedback or corrections. Thanks for your time.

Simplicticly White


Simplicticly white, earnest and true,
your angel protector, allways with you


with laughter and love, I saw Lea from above
sweet smile of hope, and heart of dove

strong as diamond, yet fragile as glass
all heaven stopped, for what was to pass

the pain so long it seems, to souls still in flesh
is but a breathe in heaven,resplendent and fresh

but words cannot say, what only a heart can tell
remember love allways Lea, and all will be well

these words I cross over to say to you,
through another, whose heart beats honest and true

remember forever child, so long as you live, that beauty and smell, of flowers and sea
the solace you felt, whilst resting upon your fathers knee

sunset in Manila may come and go, yet forever in heaven, such glorious glow
there is a soul of man, strong and proud, whose likeness and statute you know

who feels notpain, sorrow, regret or loss,
for all has been beautified, blessed and cleansed by the Cross

Simplicticly innocent, Doctor in white
let go of guilt, sadness and plight

open your heart, like never before
lest you miss love, a knock on the door

Simplicticly white, earnest and true,
your angel protector, allways with you

Frank Hiebert